yay chapter 4! messy cover
i'll have to fix it when i learn how to draw smooth-looking realistic sand, not some messy boogery lines
but for now i guess
i dont even have a steady updating schedule for this what the heck
idk i'll need to fix one again soon
also, a couple more pages to finish ch 4! the thing is, idk what on earth happens yet in ch 5, so there might be a pause, but i hope not. ;-;
Last page of ch 4 :) thanks for reading!
ACTUAL DATE: 9/12/17
ReplyDeletelol wth happened there blogger
DeleteOh my this was tense as ever!! 8D Hecckkkkkk the drama and sinister elements just continues to draw me in (haha like the sand get it... ok i'm dumb ik). To begin with, the front cover for chapter 4 is really dramatic with the sands engulfing Arawn and taking control of him in that spiral of twilight-purple and gold. It fits perfectly with the title, "Hungry Sands" too haha! (About smooth-looking sand, have you tried a grainy brush?
ReplyDeletexD I'd say it does look very desert-y, just like that texture that sifts and spirals through your fingers when you hold a handful of it if that makes sense lol...) Those colours you use to depict different times and settings throughout the chapter are so realistic and gives you the strong sense of feeling that you're there you know? 8D Another thing about the gorgeous panels... frankly, they're such masterpieces I can almost feel the glossy pages of a new comic book. <3
Anyway Sahail is SO GOOD in this?? His easy-going personality really shines in this and he's such a cinnamon roll with his always-jokey and spirited manner. Those talks about wanting to be a legend in history and the proud twinkling stars, that's so himmmm!! xD And their expressions are so precious haha, like Arawn's reaction to "The Heir Savior's Savior" omg *dies* x'D The backgrounds are too pretty and super nostalgic! Helm's appearance always injects in that good ol' drama lol. (now why'd you cross out "or Boss" tsk, tsk ... LOL) Ahh Len has no idea but man I love her. And laid-back Sahail is honestly the best thing ever and most fitting. 8) Yiiiiikes Sputty's cameo gave me excitement vibes, he's such a prince even if he's a mystery in character. ;-; <3 I really like the way he entered Sahail's vision, though, it adds in some sort of adrenaline haha. (helm honey quit snoring) Ahh the next couple of panels are so mysterious and creepy! Sahail wandering naively around and Sputnik circling sounds just about right. <8( The trauma and anxiety is real!! Whoa the part with Sahail above the sands is really breath-taking and amused me because I recall you posting this before... now why did I think that was a tree? xD You really make the power of the sands so scary here! Oh gosh and those quotes really add to the chills. ;-; I love those effects and how they relate to Arawn! And their panic following afterwards yikes. >.< Poor Sahail, why did this have to happen? >8( Arawn's last quotes there are really dramatic tho... I mean, "Disappeared like sand of the wind"... it all ties in with the plot superbly! i'm breathless man. This is EXCELLENT. Oh and Sputty's appearance at the end there... *dramatic sighing* ye he's sure royalty, my son looks so handsome. *dies* Why must you put this effect on your reader? >8( Definitely have to read the next part and I'm so sorry for being late commenting eek! <33
*sand ON the wind
DeleteAAA! This so so goood Nattie<3
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