*First draft (Part 2)
Because a post can only take so much. Anyways moving on:
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AN: Alright! That's the end of this post. :) Depending on how long it'll take me, you'll be seeing a new post with the entire ending soon, so feel free to check back within a few weeks. In the meantime, I'd love to know what you guys think of the story so far and what you think will happen! >:) Hope you're as excited as I am, and thank you so much for reading! <3
Yay, new post and OMGGG HELM'S OKAY (for now at least) SO RELIEVED. GOOD BOY, HELM. <3
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:D yay! And haha yes! :D he is! xD
Deletehelm no :"(
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see i told you it was foretold. >8D ehehehe
DeleteOkay but this is to take revenge for all these times I've read books and my favorite character dies. ;-; doesn't it always have to happen?
i always knew authors were a murderous bunch.
and that includes me.
Deleteis the portal a trap??? sputnik?? or is he trying to kill them?
ReplyDeletei love it though
Rolf
Hmm, prettty close! >:D
DeleteAnd as far as Sputnik is concerned, he could either be a very very evil character or a misunderstood dude. xD i don't want to spoilll it but we'll find out soon ;-;
(Just a small comment for now, because I just got back from piano camp yesterday and I can't type too much right now xD)
ReplyDeleteOhhh some Alia & Helm moments, hmmmm! I love their interaction!
Oh gosh, Helm's wounds are STILL causing problems D:! Hang in there, buddy!
LENORE! :D
Omg, poor Arawn... Having his own father act like that. And THEN TURNED INTO A VOID WHAT. I feel so bad for Arawn, his sad faces are soooo... well, sad. xD
Some Arawn and Helm conflict! o_O Poor Arawn is so stressed, and Helm's not doing much better at the moment!
Omgggg the portal! We're getting so close to the end WHATS GONNA HAPENNNNNNn
-Bru
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xD Noo you've already written a lot!
Delete:D Thank you! At first I wanted to rush to the ending but then I thought why not flesh the characters out a bit? xD So that means more interaction scenes. u_u
And yeah! D: I think that's becoming a major part of the story. Ugh, I just want to tell you what happens but I don't want to spoil it before the ending post! D:
xD She's kinda fun to draw. But she always seems to be either angry or sad. lol
poor girl
And omg thank you SO much Bru! ;-; Haha I'm not that good at expressions, but thank you! xD And ahh yes trouble for everyone atm D:
;-; I don't want to spoil anything, but there are going to be major things going on after that last panel. xD ahh
But anyways thank you so much Bru!! You and Rolf are always so motivating, it makes me so happy. ;-;
(Ahhh omigosh I'm SO late commenting! A month! Eeek sorry about that! D:) O.M.G. this comic is just TOO stinking GOOD girl! O.O kjnasdyinsihyasd all those backstories and legends and everything I just- And oh God your characters, so incredible!! I LOVE this story so much, no kidding! Okay but HELM IS OKAY AND HE HASN'T BEEN KILLED OFF... I liiiiive! :'D Such a good character, gosh, I love his personality. *-* <3 (I still haven't forgotten how poor Sahail got wiped out btw... why you do this to me ;-;) And omigosh you're tying me to Alia now too... eeeep she's a really formidable character too! :0 BUT THE HECK Arawn's father turned into a void! Whyyyyyy? Why did that have to happen? why??? ;-;
ReplyDeleteLOL, Helm reunites with the rain! x'D Good stuff. C: Awwwwww Sputnik has only 2 panels! I was totally counting on him to take all the pages! ;-; (nah jk xD but I love that dark dude to bits okay <33) Arawn was just SO PERFECT in this one though! His expressions are gold totally... and omg the feels. <3
(SPutnIIKKKK.... SPUTnIiKKKkkk >:DDD ... forgive me *-*)
Ahh no you don't even HAVE to comment, I always tell you that! ;-; But gosh, thank you! <33 IT REALLY MEANS A LOT OMG I CAN'T THANK YOU ENOUGH!! <3 x'D Omg! yes 8')
DeleteAnd sorry, but all authors love killing characters off, so u_u its inevitable. (xD sorry!) and ahh I know! D: I wanted him to appear more often, but I was such a lazy bum. He'll get a lot of panels in the ending post though, that's for sure! >:D And xD i love him too! Gosh, thnak you SOO MUCHH AHHHHH
(ok don't worry, ;-; I just have no idea what to say rn)
x'D
and really good quality sibling relationships i cant even
ReplyDeleteGOSHHH YOU'RE TOO KIND!! :'D
Delete!!! i just love this portal and the magic within and this is really too good, you should get this comic published, like seriously what are you waiting for ma'am!!!
ReplyDeleteOmg thank you SO SO stinking much Kenza!! Wow I really have no idea what to say- your comments are so hard to reply to because you're just TOO nice. ;-; THANK YOU!! <3
Deleteand hmm I wish it wasn't so sloppy and un-worthy of publishing. xD But I might someday!
I remember I was so excited when they came to the portal, because I was like, "I'm glad Helm is at least going to live long enough to see the new world! Oh gosh, I love this!
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xD Sorry I burst that thought then! But gosh, thank you SO much Rolfie!! :DD
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